物治貝克
物治貝克

我是貝克,這裡是由一位物理治療師建構的國度,談物理治療,也談人生大小事

[Baker Wants to Enjoy] Encountering with you, on a rainy afternoon|Writing in style

(edited)
Thanks New Sexy Magazine for launching the "Writing in Style" activity. The writing activity of "Creating Infinite Possibilities in a Limited Framework" is really exciting. I just have a writing style I want to try, so I will play with this activity. I got up and burned my brain for a day to share with you. If you have any ideas, please leave a message below and tell me!
(original)
At noon, in a fast food restaurant, a woman, 30 years old, 165 cm tall, with fair skin and freckles on her cheeks, was wearing a light blue floral dress with a red silk scarf around her. Bought a burger set at the restaurant.
She was holding a dinner plate to find a seat. A young man sat on the seat where she was about to sit down. She had a conflict with the young man. Finally, the young man stood up with a bad expression and bumped into her dinner plate as he walked, and the cola fell. down.
The woman pointed at the young man's back, and after scolding for a while, she began to eat. She accidentally got a silk scarf while squeezing the ketchup, and she immediately took a tissue to clean it.
In the afternoon, she was drinking coffee in a coffee shop with a man in a black suit. She had changed into a blue silk scarf. The man said that this dress looks better with a red silk scarf.


"This dress looks better with a red silk scarf..."

For a person who has just shuttled between the crowds, the rain is all over his face;

Take pains to dress up, especially the finishing touch of blue;

Get rid of the Internet data line, the girl you meet for the first time appears in front of you,

Your performance is so thrilling...


In the rainy afternoon, against the rush of my exhalation, the clouds of white smoke were hazy.

"I know I'm a long time late, but you don't have to say that about my finely dressed!"


Inside the fast food restaurant, looking at your blushing blushing, there was silence for a long time.

"Sorry for ruining your good mood, it's just that the red scarf in my hand is just right for you."


You and I, who are so unfamiliar,

I was wearing blue, embarrassingly glued, and put them in my pocket.

Suddenly, the smile on your face reveals the focus of your attention on ketchup;

Wandering eyes, on my neck and shoulders, that red silk scarf wrapped around your starting point.


It turns out that it has been eight years, and it seems that it is the first time to meet each other. Yesterday, I was in front of me.

Even that can never get tired of eating, our two favorite meals:


"Big Mac Cola medium potato, fries de-salted"  …


"Miss...Miss! Your meal is ready!"

When I came back to my senses, I found that I was standing at this familiar counter again. Apologizing and bowing my head, avoiding the suspicious eyes of the lady at the counter, holding my memory and turning my head away, I can continue to immerse myself in the time you were still there. After all, the way back to "there", in these 8 years I have walked countless times.


"Auntie, be careful, I'm sitting here!"

Every time we come here, we have to sit in that corner. You said it would be easier to protect me this way, but... I was dragged back to reality again by this rude greeting.

My neck was so angry that I wanted to swallow the red silk scarf: angry why you were taken away by God without looking back; angry that I was so deeply immersed in the past beautiful dreams, and the neglected years were taken away by time in the mirror; angry He is in the position that I am most familiar with, leaving a temperature that is not yours, and he will not leave.


"It's weird! It's just a position, why are you crying like this!"

Crash, crash, crash... With tears and the sound of rain, I yelled at him incoherently, but the embarrassed young man who couldn't match the eyes of the surrounding people quickly got up, left those words and left without looking back, leaving me unrecognizable. And the mess all over the place.

I squatted down, picked up the scattered memories regardless of others, and reassembled them. The trembling hands couldn't squeeze ketchup well, and they stained the red silk scarf you gave me. Thinking of your original smile, holding the red-stained tissue in your hand, weeping again......


After the tragic trip at noon, I fell into bed when I got home,


Deep in the warmth surrounded by your flavors...


"If I leave, you must find someone better than me to take care of you!"

Still in the same position, you touched my head and said to me;

"You're really in trouble!" I said with a smile, but your hot eyes dispelled the thought of joking.

We stayed in bed that night and talked about it all night:

I said I'm not that strong, you can't leave me alone;

You say you don't know what the future will hold, you just hope that there will always be someone who truly loves me holding my hand...


"Ring Ling Ling......"

I don't know how long I've slept, and I'm still half asleep, half awake,

Unlike the weather in the weather report, the sound of rain is annoying.

Take a pat on the air in your shape, but luckily it's just work.


"Ring Ling Ling ..."

This is not an alarm, I was startled and woke up suddenly,

But I suddenly had no courage, no energy, no mood to pick up the phone,

"Instant news reports that a car accident just happened on New Taipei Avenue, New Taipei City..."


"Ring Ting Ling......", "Ring Ting Ling......"......


Wake up! jump out of bed,

Suddenly I remembered the blind date my mother arranged for me today, number 27.

I have always remembered what you said, so even if it is far away,

I have never given up the task of finding those hands.


The same date, rainy afternoon,

The same light blue floral dress with a red silk scarf...  

Oh yes, if it gets dirty accidentally, then use this...blue one!


Teasing the watch, and perhaps being late again,

But it's so wonderful, and the impatience is inexplicable,

The lingering sound of rain and the hustle and bustle of traffic seemed to be urging me to arrive.

With the whistle of the traffic police, I started running among the crowd;

Even umbrellas are thrown away, splashing chaotic pace,

But I didn't catch up with my inner feet, and I still didn't arrive on time:

"Hello... I'm sorry I'm late..."


This man who had never met, revealed a familiar look,

A little nervous but not able to hide the reassuring calm.

The conversation is neither shallow nor deep, just enough not to be too boring, and the hour hand is set fast,

By the time of the 27th separation, he asked me to wait...  


Then he took out a gift box with a red scarf from behind, that smile was so bright...

"Actually, I think... this dress looks better with a red silk scarf!"



I'm Baker, I'm a physical therapist,

son, brother,

Husband, son-in-law...


When wearing or not wearing a therapeutic gown,

normal, usual,

commonplace everyday,

Joy, anger, sadness, and joy, all want to share with you;

Sour, sweet, bitter, spicy, I want you to taste it too.


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