So the sea breeze blew the plane trees
The origin of this poem is the performance-style relay action on April 22nd (it was only a few months, and the strong mood was already blurred, like every similar moment in the past), when I feel that it is necessary to write a poem for Shanghai. It is hard for me to imagine afterwards that this first attempt on a new subject was written in one day, and the completion level was very high, which made me quite satisfied - this is probably due to the accumulation of spiritual Shanghai people for many years (mistake), of course , and the foreshadowing of Li Chengpeng's earlier article. Every day in April, people ask, what happened to Shanghai? At the end of the day, when tameness becomes the consensus, and you still hold the tone, you are the one to be beaten. So Sven swept the floor, so ritual collapsed and music broke. But oddly enough, in many of the narratives, the tone is blamed for it all, which is really weird. I made up "Myth of Love" a few days ago, and the common comment is: Why are all the dialogues in Shanghai dialect? Why not speak Mandarin? These are the necessities for me to write this poem. Later, Shanghai was unblocked, and it seemed that nothing happened - "You left me in Shanghai, and I laughed it off." But we all know that something is lost forever, "since then I never saw the sunset of that day" - of course, this loss has been going on for a long time. Later, it was my turn to isolate myself at home for a week and eat a free lunch box - but this is not worthy of gratitude. Today, the same plot is replicated in Chengdu, and there is even a disaster stacking buff. Honestly, I'm in a numb mood right now, whatever - sadly, that's what they want. But this rigid state will not last forever. At least, the emotions at that time have been stored in the text by me, and once I read it, I am awakened once. Meida said in the last push, Memory is a Weapon. Memory is our weapon.
late spring
you didn't come in april
The Grain Rain is over, Nong¹
呒 did not come, if all
The promised spring won't come?
God does not speak
like everything is determined by dead soil
Cloves, open or not²
"Stop for a while"-Fu Haozai...
"Go back" - Falao...
"Fall again..." - It's so good! ³
You're used to it, an hour
Can go from Jiangsu to southern Shaanxi
No one has reminded you for a hundred years that they
In fact, we are separated by thousands of mountains and rivers⁴
A few pilots are standing on the balcony today
Ira said, always be alert to small turns
So she went to the other side for a cheongsam⁵
Remember the old foundation and the big world
Later, Nong said, create a new world
But it turned out to be one world a day⁶
The black sky is bleeding
But I don't know how to do it
So the sea breeze blew the plane trees
So the giant ship ran aground on the Suzhou River⁷
I haven't seen it since
Such an unparalleled sunset
Maybe you made a mistake? ⁸
It hurts yin! sin, sin⁹
What exactly did Nong do-
so that your back is always on me¹
2022.4.23 made; 2022.9.6 resurrected
*Three paragraphs in italics, original as hanging indent
Further reading
1. Wang Jiangshan " You Didn't Come This April " "I know you must have done something so that you have to turn your back on me forever"; Grain Rain is the last solar term in spring; some Wu dialects are irregularly interspersed (the meaning is omitted). ), in an attempt to create a (clumsy) sense of jump, while achieving rhyme in the jump between Mandarin and Wu
2. Jin Yucheng's "Flowers" "God does not speak, like everything is up to me"; Eliot "The Wasteland" "April is the cruellest month..."; cf.
3. The people of Wudi saw that something bad was about to happen, and said, "It's good for you (it's not good), and when it does happen, they say: "It's good for Naimo (now it's good), cf. Great!" ; the quotation marks are the words of Tadanobu Asano in "The History of the Death of Romantic"
4. Near Andingfang, Jiangsu Road, Fu Lei (1908-1966) family, Gu Shengying (1937-1967) family, and Zhang Ailing's younger brother lived; No. 11, Lane 159, Maoming South Road, near South Shaanxi Road, former residence of Lin Zhao (1932-1968) ; Looking at the map at that time, the two places have been unblocked, but they are separated from each other by the closed control area (see the picture below). It was originally an hour's walk, but now it seems to be the real distance from Jiangsu to southern Shaanxi.
5. "How many airborne troops are there today" - Chen Yi, 1952; Shanghai dialect "small turn" means "right turn"; Zhang Ailing thought for a second, knowing that she still likes the beautiful cheongsam, and left; cf. Li Chengpeng, " Shanghai is a great river that heralds the next hundred years "
6. Shanghai has a big world, a new world, and the meaning of "one day world" or "mess".
7. The circus on the top floor "Sea Breeze", "Suzhou River Love Song" Yiqun
8. Yukio Mishima's "Kinkakuji Temple" (see the picture below)
9. The people of Wudi saw small evil things and said: If a sin is a big sin, it is called "severe sin " ; cf.
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