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"The Soldiers Are Before" by Spotted White Bones

The reason for releasing the old commentary on "The Fall of the World" is to write this. I recently started reading criminal investigation papers

Xia Bingyang spent five years in adolescence with his considerate elder brother Ji Zheng, who was eight years older than him. One day, he accidentally (actually designed) saw Ji Zheng having sex with his lover at the time, and was greatly affected. Shocked (also because Ji Zheng threw him with a peach and told him to go out, and has a psychological shadow on peach since then), Ji Zheng wanted to explain to him but refused to see him, and then Ji Zheng left sadly, and the two have not met since year. Xia Bingyang secretly checked Ji Zheng's whereabouts after he became a police officer. He only knew that he had set up a mobile phone number, but the phone could not be connected. On July 12, 2018, he suddenly called Ji Zheng's phone, but he was on the phone with Ji Zheng on the same month and day in 2012. Xia Bingyang in 2018 and Ji Zheng in 2012 solved three major cases together in a short period of time by making phone calls. When he is lucky, Ji Zheng can travel through time and space to 2018, so he can still fall in love until September 2012. Until the 30th Jizheng incident.... Qiangqiang Lord Shou Nian Shang, (specially attracting perverts), a heartthrob with a calm personality, the big brother next door, attacking x irritable boss, cunning criminal police captain, Sao Bao Youth Shou, 800,000 words long, HE.

First of all, reading this article often reminds me of Shanheling, because their city is called Weining City. In addition, my wife's "Yunxi hug" appeared, that is, Xia Bingyang jumped up in front of Ji Zheng and hung it on Ji Zheng's body to hug him, so did the author read the biography of Yunxi...

( This is Yun Xi's hug )

The background setting of this article, at a glance, knows that it is inspired by "Signal", but it is too deliberate, and a lot of logic can't be rounded up. After reading it, readers will definitely have a question, why did Xia Bingyang in 2018 not want to find Ji Zheng at the same time, and Ji Zheng in 2012 did not want to find Xia Bingyang at the same time? Didn't both want to see each other at the same time? 2018's Xia Xunji has been looking for a long time and can't find it, so forget it, but 2012's Ji seems to know where Xia was at that time. In addition, a lot of information could be communicated with each other during the investigation of the case, but Xia did not know that the wronged deputy director Min Chengzhou in the first case was an old friend of Ji Zheng, and some important findings of the investigation of the case were not communicated. What's even more incredible is that when this article goes to the later stage, Ji Zheng seems to be able to appear if he wants to appear, and disappear if he wants to disappear (but this may also be the author's problem, her way of writing when Ji appears and disappears seems to be Ji herself. can be controlled), so powerful? And, what kind of onion is Ji Zheng, and why is Xia Neng, a criminal policeman, taking an unidentified amateur to the scene of a murder case that is supposed to be strictly controlled?

This is a serious criminal investigation article, while the criminal investigation reasoning type attaches the most importance to logical reasoning. In criminal investigation texts that need to be treated rigorously, there are fantasy elements that are not clearly explained. This kind of setting is very novel, but because criminal investigation texts pay attention to logic, if the fantasy elements are not given a reasonable explanation that can convince most people, "reasonable" Combining two extreme situations of "criminal investigation" and "unreasonable fantasy" in one article will make the reader (= me) feel very uncomfortable, and at the same time feel that the case is reasonable and exciting, and at the same time feel that other parts are illogical, this kind of paradox The contradiction makes me feel sticky all over.

Of course, it can also be said that these incomprehensible logical failures can be explained by "the time line in the text is too short, and the two have no time to investigate more". This full text is 800,000 words, but the time in the text is only two months. But this is also very good. The cases that happened in just two months are all related to 2012 and 2018. This... well, I can only say that "SIGNAL" is also set like this, but people are still highly regarded. God's work.

In addition, Ji Zheng is a heartthrob certified by the author, but his feelings with other people are all picked up and put down gently, not to mention the complicated feelings of his niece with split personality, and Su Xingye, who does have emotional entanglements with him (he finally Where did it go?), it seems cynical, who claims to only want to be a gun friend, but actually has fallen in love with Ji's enemy Yan Shen, all of them are tools that are thrown away after they are used, and can't give a deep impression of "this supporting role has characteristics", which is a pity . (Actually, if Yan Shen really goes to bed with Ji, I'm still very interested in whoever will attack and whoever will suffer)

Regarding the relationship line, the introduction states: "I like you for many years but I dare not tell you because I don't think you will like me. In fact, you have liked me for many years, but you didn't tell me because you also think I won't. like you". The two had a secret crush on both sides for a long time. The reason why they separated was because Xia saw Ji and his then boyfriend having sex. Ji felt ashamed of Xia, so he left the stage sadly, and only after he left did Xia realize that he liked him. In terms of the plot timeline, they were together less than a month after their reunion, but in terms of the length of this article, it is a slow and hot article.

The most interesting thing about this article is, does the author really want to talk about "time" as a closed loop, or is there an open possibility? It means, can the protagonist of this article change the future because he knows the future in advance? In terms of plot lines, all the "fruits" that appeared in 2018 had Ji in 2012, because they knew that Xia participated in the investigation of the case in 2018. In other words, in each case, there was no "cause" in the case. Ji Tiao knew early about the tragedies that occurred in the "future" of the people involved in the case from 2012 to 2018, and made any changes to the investigation in the summer of 2018; In 2012, Xia Bingyang changed Ji Zheng's original destiny. The difference between the two is that when Ji Zheng changed his destiny, it was after he was suddenly unable to continue to call Xia Bingyang for unknown reasons, so that is to say, he could not change the future he knew (such as the people involved in the case), But he can still change the future he doesn't know. In this way, the author's comparison between the plot line and the emotional line is also very interesting.

In general, it is the same as the last paragraph of the commentary on "Falling in the World", that is, the case is very "fancy", with cases in the case and cases outside the case appearing one after another. Although the reasoning is simplified, it can make readers dazzled. It is a way of expression of mystery novels, so it can also be called wonderful. It's just that the fantasy setting of "Signal-like" is not very reasonable. I feel very uncomfortable from the beginning to the end, so the evaluation will be lower than that of "Fall in the World". Well, for me, in principle, the starting point will be higher in order to encourage the authors of the long-form dramas).

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