Talf宅
Talf宅

Hi 我是Talf宅,將自身的生活體驗、學習、閱讀等心得,藉由文章分享出來。留給自己也給有興趣的人。

Style Writing Exercise | Taste

Style writing activities, come and try it together.

original:

 At noon, in a fast food restaurant, a woman, 30 years old, 165 cm tall, with fair skin and freckles on her cheeks, was wearing a light blue floral dress with a red silk scarf around her. Bought a burger set at the restaurant.
She was holding a dinner plate to find a seat. A young man sat on the seat where she was about to sit down. She had a conflict with the young man. Finally, the young man stood up with a bad expression and bumped into her dinner plate as he walked, and the cola fell. down.
The woman pointed at the young man's back, and after scolding for a while, she began to eat. She accidentally got a silk scarf while squeezing the ketchup, and she immediately took a tissue to clean it.
In the afternoon, she was drinking coffee in a coffee shop with a man in a black suit. She had changed into a blue silk scarf. The man said that this dress looks better with a red silk scarf.

Creation: Taste

At noon, I was sitting in a fast food restaurant. The heat of summer made me completely lose my appetite for the pizza in front of me.

At this time, a new customer entered the store. It was a woman who looked about 30 years old. She was about 165 cm tall with high heels. She had fair skin and freckles on her cheeks. She was wearing a light blue floral jumpsuit. The dress is surrounded by a red silk scarf. Her outfit reminds me of that cool, thirst-quenching, super-dream blue ocean espresso bubble drink, with a tempting red cherry on the edge of the cup. It seemed to dissipate the heat from the whole body.

Seeing that the woman bought a hamburger set meal at the restaurant, and held the plate to find the seat she wanted to sit, suddenly a young man sat in the seat where she was about to sit, and she could feel her displeasure, Afterwards, there was a conflict with the young man. In the end, the young man couldn't compete, so she stood up looking bad, and when she left, she deliberately bumped into her dinner plate, and the cola fell down.

It seems that even this woman's temper is like a super dreamy blue ocean gradation bubble drink. The taste is not acceptable to everyone. Drinking it too fast will make her stomach uncomfortable.

Then the woman pointed and scolded for a while behind the young man's back, and then started to eat. I don't know if she was still angry. She accidentally got a silk scarf while squeezing the ketchup. She hurriedly took a tissue to clean it up. This picture really looks like a mouth smear The girl with bright lips found her bright red lip print on the edge of the cup after drinking the drink, and hurriedly wiped it off. She was really cute, and thanks to her patronage, I had an appetite for the pizza in front of me.

In the afternoon, the high sun was just as frustrating as it was, so I hurriedly hid in a cafe to avoid it. I didn’t expect to see this woman again. She was chatting happily and drinking coffee with a man in a black suit, but she The original red scarf has been replaced with blue. This is not just removing the enticing red cherries, and using the same blue shape cup to hold it, so that it is not the dreamy blue ocean gradient bubble drink. Just a boring glass of sparkling water.

At this time, I happened to hear the man who was sitting with her, and said to her that your dress would look better with a red silk scarf.

Ha, looks like this guy has the same taste as me!


Originally, the first draft was written as a story creation, which turned out to be wrong 😵‍💫, so I wrote another one. As for the story creation, I have washed my head off, and I will publish it when it is completed, so don’t waste your efforts 😄.

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