日日更ep.3|对话练习

受友邻启发，日日更写作练习。因为网上没有找到这本书，便只能借鉴她的题目了，在此感谢。

写作训练 4: one-sided telephone conversation

1: Write a section of one-sided dialogue in which you (or a character) are having a conversation on the phone but we can only hear your (or your character's) side of the conversation

2: You can use narrative in the form of "stage directions," (the wind blew the paper out of his hand, the sun is going down) but that's all. Otherwise, everything has to be dialogue ONLY.

3: Make sure the conversation fulfills the following two constraints:

a: There is a disagreement between the character and the person on the other end of the phone about something (it can and should be a small thing).

b: The other person (the one not heard) has the upper hand (more power) in the conversation

她：今晚不回来吃饭咯。

他：好吧。

她：你怎么回应得那么快？你是不是本来就没准备？

他：我给你自由难道不好吗？

她：你不要转移话题。

忙音。。。。。

她马上去看他ins上的关注列表，发现在关注列表里出现了一个新增加的互相关注女孩的面孔。