Novel Experience - The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals (Forgotten Language)

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I wanted to read it quickly, so I wrote it after reviewing the content. I don't know if I read it again, and it took a month.

When I first read this, it was not long after I came into contact with Xiuxian novels, but now I look back and read it again, and I feel that some things are more old-fashioned

Of course, the reason why this novel is praised is because it created the mortal stream, which was considered a clean stream at the time, and naturally there have been many improvements since then.

So it's a bit unfair to look at it by the standard after that.

The good part is written by many people on the Internet, and it is because of these recommendations that I will start reading it of course.

anyhow

The overall structure is very complete, not the kind of flooded novel that writes as much as you want

Personally, I think the author's ideas and concepts are good, but the writing is not good

Much progress has been made in this part

Bad writing is not really a big problem. Many online novels have this problem, and the selling point is not the writing.

What was initially unacceptable was the imprecise use of certain words

For example, words such as "copy" and seckill appear, and there are many places where words are used incorrectly.

But it doesn't affect reading, nor does it affect the status of this book

Similar to the previous question

It's just that the author is too lazy to choose a name, or does it deliberately

The book is full of pronouns such as "Master Li, Senior Brother Huang" and "Old Man in Gray".

Originally, according to the logic of the plot, it is normal to not know the name

But after a long time, I learned that most of the people who use this name are the essentials.

Some characters have many chapters in a row, occupying a certain amount of space, but still the same name

It's a little uncomfortable to look at

I remember that the biggest unaccustomed thing to reading this book was the passage of time, it was a hundred or a thousand years, but after reading other novels, I felt that it was just fine.

The reason for this feeling is that the author will explain the "past"

It is to have an intersection with the personnel and affairs before the immortal cultivation in the past. It is to make some endings to the past. In the story, the author makes a conclusion to the past self.

Make your mood more perfect

Such frequent turning back to say goodbye to one's past is rarely seen in other novels

Most of the other novels are abandoned characters, at most accidental, or they are old stalks like going back and growing the family.

This is one of the things I love about this book

This book mainly focuses on "mortals", but in fact, it is probably around the Yuan Ying, and it is not related to mortals.

After all, the plug-in is also very open. Even if you don't rely on elixir, all kinds of treasure exercises are enough to defy the sky.

As a result, in the middle and late stages, I can only constantly emphasize the ordinary appearance

But to be honest, according to the setting of Xian's novel, changing the appearance is probably as easy as eating.

So I'm also curious, under the same aesthetic conditions, will there be high-level female nuns who don't look good?

The character of the protagonist Han Li is almost "from the beginning to the end"

Basically not the type of cerebral congestion

Except for the "unsmart" part at the beginning, the latter is reasonable, and it can probably be rationalized by being more sophisticated.

And I also think that such a character is likely to go on the road of immortality for a long time

All day long, I don't know how many times I'm going to die if I don't open the protagonist's plug-in.

There are also many times in the talk where you don't join without enough incentives, or you don't want to fight recklessly.

Another point that many people care about

It's that the protagonist doesn't breed horses, and the book Mortals is a very breed of horses.

This is also one of my favorite points

But the same heroine has too few scenes

Then you can feel that the author is very limited in some words to describe the emotions of men and women

extended question

In fact, I think the supporting characters in the book "Mortal" are very "shadow books"

Although I knew from the beginning that the protagonist only values "self"

Therefore, sects, apprentices, partners, etc. were not considered by Han Li from the beginning.

Although these characters appear as the story progresses

But the focus has always been on "self"

There's nothing wrong with that, it's a personal characteristic.

It's just that magic weapons and spiritual pets have more scenes than the heroine. It's a bit magical.

In terms of narrative, most fiction narratives are linear, but Mortal is more like a TV movie, skipping certain segments and then going back and adding explanations.

Other novels are similar, but they are usually used in a larger time span or when things are sloppy.

But sometimes the description is too long-winded, the magic weapon, the function details are written too much (of course, other novels often have this situation)

The second is to use a lot of unreasonable dialogue to explain the cause and effect to the reader

The enemy also loves to explain

The frequency of switching maps is a bit high

Replacing various unreasonable backhands with switching maps is also a solution

No wonder PTT jokingly called Han Paopao

After the later stage (Mahayana), the small units are brushed too fast, there is no main plot, and the treasures have been collected

Feels a bit redundant

Although it is for rewinding, I always feel that it can be simpler

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I also watched the fairyland chapter of "Mortal" before

But to be honest, I can't watch it

It should be said that it has fallen into a similar mode.

These patterns are not only repeated in Mortals

In other novels, I often read it, and it becomes uninteresting

It seems easy to get tired

Maybe there will be time in the future to read the fairyland chapter again.

But at least not for now